On Tuesday James came to Room 4 and we had to make a positive, thoughtful and helpful comment. This is to help us comment on posts in a way which help the posters learning and future posts.
Hi my name is Carlos. I go to Kumara School. Next time try make your work bigger so we all can read it. We are learning about writing comments too. Well done writing so much.
Well done Paula you have made a great effort but just remember to check your work before publishing.
ReplyDeleteWell done Paula you have made a great effort but just remember to check your work before publishing.
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Carlos. I go to Kumara School. Next time try make your
ReplyDeletework bigger so we all can read it. We are learning about writing comments too. Well done writing so much.
Hi Paula I really love your work
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